This was absolutely amazing! I love your style - it's so different and simple but in a really effective way. I love the minimal dialogue with the dashes and the progression of their burgeoning relationship... which neither of them seemed to get, but felt comfortable with.
I really really enjoyed this and was so impressed. Please write more! And I love the end..... it kept with all the little details you mentioned (keys, leaving in the morning) but indicated the significant shift in their relationship.
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Date: 2007-03-01 10:48 pm (UTC)I really really enjoyed this and was so impressed. Please write more! And I love the end..... it kept with all the little details you mentioned (keys, leaving in the morning) but indicated the significant shift in their relationship.